The First First Responders

“It’s going to take forever to get there in this snow.”

That was the first remark I heard about the event, aside from the basics: place, fire type, and potential casualty estimate.

For those interested, the answers were “Silver Stream Forest off RR7, unknown, and unknown.”

We were in the middle of a once-in-a-century snowstorm. Those once-in-a-century storms that seem to come every five years nowadays. Doesn’t mean much to some, but for those of us who have to work and drive in them to save lives, it matters.

That night, it mattered.

Our station is the only one in the area. Under ideal conditions, the rural route seven connection to the forest would be a 35 minute drive. We’d be lucky to get there in 90.

An hour into the drive, we saw the aurorae, despite the howling wind blowing heaps of snow through the air. I’d guess the visibility was less than ten feet. But the aurorae were clear.

“Electrical?” John posited.

“Not sure how that’d work,” someone answered — sounded like Lloyd.

“No.” John agreed. “Me neither.”

I looked out the side window toward the direction of the lightshow. It wasn’t like the kind I’d seen when I spent time in Iceland after college. Nothing like that. These ribbons of light were thin and fast moving. And red, too. All shades of red, from deep crimson to something that neared orange.

“Definitely not the borealis,” I said, mostly to myself.

John got on the radio and asked dispatch if there was any new information. They were still working on it.

“There’s nothing but woods and houses out there as far as I know,” Andy said. “Nothing that’d be causing anything like that.”

“Maybe a meth lab?” Lloyd suggested.

“I doubt it,” John said. “But I can’t think of anything el…”

The radio crackled. Jenny from dispatch.

“Looks like a plane might have gone down,” Jenny informed us. “Ted Davis from the airport over in Lovis said he was tracking something for a few minutes before it went off the radar. Said it disappeared right around where our first call came in. He didn’t see any transponder info on the plane, so probably military. Hope you guys are ready for company.”

Jenny laughed as she told us this last part. I think all of us rolled our eyes.

We’d had to deal with accidents that resulted from goings-on at the military base before. Lots of dick swinging from military folks about jurisdiction and procedure and all of that. Nothing any of us wanted to deal with.

“Thanks Jenny,” John answered. “Let us know when you get anything else. Oh, and try calling over to the base. I know they usually don’t answer, but if they’re already heading over then we can be ready for that whole situation.”

“Ok,” Jenny radioed.

At that moment, we were a little more than halfway to the site.

“Who called this in, anyway?” Andy asked.

“A homeowner,” I said. “Remember a couple years ago when there were those protests about that company cutting down some quote-unquote sacred indian forest?”

“Oh yeah, is that where this is?”

“Yeah, the company put up a housing complex for long-term contractors who work on the base. About a hundred units. Looks like the fire’s near there.”

“So why are we the ones going driving through this shitshow of a storm when the military guys could be dealing with it?”

“Don’t know what to tell you, man.”

We rode in silence for a little while. Snow gouted from the sky in dense, heavy flakes. In the lights of the truck combined with the strange atmospheric lightshow, the flakes were an eerie, dark pink.

Lloyd spoke up. “If this is a military aircraft, there’s definitely going to be a hazmat situation. God knows the kind of shit they have on those things.”

I nodded. “And we’ve all dealt with hazmats more times than I can count.”

“I think I see something,” John announced, pointing.

The rest of us squeezed together and looked. The telltale orange glow of fire was visible in the distance, filtered through the thick, gauzy flakes.

“Where are we, exactly?” Andy said to himself, looking at the GPS. A few seconds later: “Jesus, we’re still miles from where the call came in. Either Jenny was off with the location or that fire’s a fucking monster if we can see it through this much snow.”

“We’re at the top of a hill looking down into the valley,” John said, squinting to see the road. “That development Erica was talking about is right in the middle around there,” he pointed, “so since the fire’s there,” he moved his finger to the left,” it looks like the plane missed most of the units. Anyway, by the time we get there, I think the storm will have done a lot of firefighting for us.

“Hey guys,” Jenny’s voice came through the radio, “come in.”

“Go ahead,” John answered.

“The military said they had no flights scheduled for tonight because of the weather.”

“Well that’s a plus,” Lloyd chimed from the back. “I wasn’t in the mood to deal with those assholes.”

Jenny continued. “They also said we shouldn’t respond to the fire.”

The four of us all muttered our own versions of, “what the fuck are they talking about?”

John clicked the talk button on the radio. “Jenny, what do they mean ‘don’t respond?’”

“They didn’t say. Just that they’ll handle the cleanup when the weather clears.”

“When the weather clears?” John seemed incredulous. “Didn’t a plane crash into a bunch of fucking houses?”

“That’s what it looks like,” Jenny replied. “And I’ve gotten more calls from homeowners in the complex. It’s burning hard. You’re going to have multiple casualties. I called over to Hewitt and Jaynes counties to see if they could send their own units. Both can, but it’s going to be a while before they get there. You guys are flying solo for a while. Do your best.”

“Any word on hazmats from the callers?”

“I asked but couldn’t get a straight answer. Proceed in the way you think is best.”

“How about the Captain? Did you get him?”

“Yeah, I got his wife on her cell phone and she woke him up. He’s the one who said ‘proceed in the way you think is best.”

“Fine, thanks Jenny.”

“No problem. You boys be safe out there.”

“Okay,” I announced, as we turned off the main road onto the rural route. The housing complex was close. Orange light from the fire began to overtake the shine of our lights in the cab of the truck. “Breathers on, full hazmat protocols in effect, etc etc etc. You guys know what to do. People first, fire second.

“Andy, find a good triage spot and set up the medical stuff. John, Lloyd, and I will…”

“What the fucking Christ is that?” John interrupted. The truck slowed as he applied the brakes, its heavy tire chains chewing into the snow.

“What?” I asked, staring.

“That,” John said, pointing at the power pylon on the side of the road.

We peered through the windshield.

“I don’t see any…” Andy started, but then stopped. He saw it. Then the rest of us did.

Something was draped over the top of the pylon. It glistened in the flickering light of the fire. I couldn’t make sense of it.

“Let’s go,” I told John. “We need to get in there.”

John resumed driving, but the four of us craned our necks as we passed by the pylon try to figure out what it was we were looking at.

No luck.

A few minutes later, we arrived at the complex.

“Wow,” Lloyd muttered. “That’s must’ve been quite the fire.”

It was an understatement. In the time it had taken us to drive there, it looked like the worst of the flames had burned out. The majority of the western quarter of the housing complex had been leveled. Small, isolated fires still licked at the parts of the structure still standing, however, flickering and blinking out under the onslaught of snow. The firewalls separating the units seemed to have worked pretty well.

“Why isn’t there anyone outside?” Andy asked, and gestured to the building on the other side of the parking lot that looked like a recreation center. “There’s no footprints going over there.”

“Probably got filled in by the snow,” Lloyd said. “But I don’t see any lights in there, either.”

“It looks like there’s still part of the building still standing on the far west end of the complex,” I said, squinting at the structure through the snow. “We’ll start there looking for casualties. I don’t know how much longer that part can remain standing and I don’t want anyone who survived the fire having the building fall down around them.

“Andy, do your triage center at the rec place across the street. We’ll take anyone we find still alive over there. The rest of you, let’s go.”

Lloyd, John, and I, donning the rest of our equipment, trudged through the snow in the direction of the western part of the complex.

“I can hardly make out what that wing of the building looked like before it burned,” Lloyd said. His voice was clear in our in-helmet radios. “I don’t know if what’s still standing is the stairwell or elevator column or what.”

“Yeah,” I responded slowly, staring with curiosity at the structural piece jutting out of the charred ground and debris.

“Where is everybody?” John wondered.

We were a hundred feet from the remains of the structure. There was much less snow to walk through here, since the fire had melted most of it. It was icy, though, and the three of us struggled to walk over the treacherous terrain in our heavy gear.

“Andy, has anyone come to you?” I asked over the radio.

“No,” he radioed back. “I haven’t seen a soul.”

“I’m gonna drop the lights here,” Lloyd said, and placed the powerful construction lamps on the ice, pointing them at the skeletal remains of the building.

I couldn’t help but notice how silent the scene was. Above us, the last of the aurorae that’d been with us blinked out.

Lloyd flipped the switch for the lights. Bright, white beams blasted the charred side of the structure. My eyes widened.

“That’s…different,” John whispered into the radio.

Neither Lloyd nor I replied. The three of us stared at the structure in front of us.

It wasn’t the remains of a building. It wasn’t any building at all — not one that I’d ever seen. It was wedge-shaped, maybe 50 feet high, and covered in mounds that reminded me of metal that had melted and left to cool. It jutted from the ground, almost as if it had been shoved into the dirt.

“Guys,” Lloyd said, and gestured. A blackened body lay face-up about a dozen or so feet away from the wedge.

“Another one,” I informed, pointing. “And there. And there.”

All in all, it looked like twenty bodies, all charred beyond recognition, were strewn around the site.

“Can we get up that thing?” John asked.

“I don’t think we can,” I replied, studying the smooth topography of the wedge.

“Maybe if we could get up there…” John suggested, pointing at a hole in its side. “Do you think the ladder will reach?”

“Probably not,” I said. “The closest place we can bring the truck is over there and I doubt that’ll be close enough. Let’s do a quick check around this area for any survivors, then move on to the less damaged parts.

“Hey Andy? If no one’s coming to you and you’re done setting up, start knocking on doors.

“And Jenny? Can you hear me from my helmet or is that not working again?”

“I read you, Erica,” Jenny chirped.

“Can you get call routing to give you the phone numbers of the people who called this thing in and call them back? We’ve got no one out here. Not a soul.”

“Pretty spooky,” Jenny radioed. “I just got a call from the county – there’s supposed to be a few hundred folks living there by now.”

“A few hundred?” Andy radioed from the other side of the complex. He sounded bewildered. “I’ve got nobody here. No one’s answering doors. And you guys saw when we came in, the parking lots are full.”

“We’ll be in touch,” I told Jenny, ending our connection, then, to the guys, “we’ll start going door-to-door with An—”

Andy interrupted me on the radio.

“I need you guys to come here now. Like right now. To the truck.”

There was something in his voice that froze my blood. He sounded small. Frightened. Andy. Andy Dross. Andy Dross, the US Marine medic who served in Fallujah before he joined the department with us.

“We’re coming Andy,” I said, and the three of us turned and headed toward him.

“There’s someone there with him,” Lloyd called.

“Thank God,” I thought. “Someone who can tell us what happened here.”

Andy was standing with his back to the truck. He wasn’t moving. He just stared at the person in front of him. As we got closer, it looked like he the person was another man, around Andy’s height. He didn’t look burned, at least from the back, and he was dressed in pajamas despite the driving snow.

“Sir, are you oka—” I began, walking up to them and standing beside Andy.

The man’s face was missing. Everything, from his forehead to his chin, was gone. I could see the inside of his brainless skull from top to bottom, ear to ear. There was no dripping blood. No clumps of gore. Just a wet, gaping hole.

“What the…” Lloyd gasped.

“He came out of that building,” Andy said, jerking his chin in the direction of the unit behind us, “and tapped me on the shoulder. He hasn’t moved since then.”

I turned around. Footprints in the snow led from the doorway to where the man stood.

John shone his flashlight into the man’s skull. Light reflected wetly within the cavity.

Andy reached out and touched the man’s shoulder, waited for a moment, then pushed. The man resisted the shove, balancing himself on steady legs.

“Hey folks!” came a voice in our helmets. The four of us jumped a mile. It was Jenny.

“You find anyone out there? Any survivors?”

“I don’t know,” I answered honestly. “I don’t think so?”

“Okay, well, I talked to the guy in call routing and he said he couldn’t get an ID on the numbers that reported the plane crash.”

It was a full minute before anyone replied. We couldn’t stop staring at the survivor.

I eventually spoke up. “Were the numbers blocked?”

“No,” Jenny said, “he told me the calls came from a utility extension, like the ones technicians use when they test the phone lines from the pole.”

“Utility extension,” I parroted, thinking.

The man with the hole for a face twitched violently.

“Jenny, we have to go,” I muttered.

“Okay,” she said, and I heard her radio click off.

“What’s he doing?” Andy asked, as if we’d have any idea.

“Look at that!” John exclaimed, and shone the flashlight at the top of the survivor’s missing forehead.

A string of slime, as thin as just a few hairs, was extruding from the space between his skull and scalp. As we watched, it stretched out and over the truck, toward the road where we came in. Phlegmy, guttural noises came from his throat, accompanied by blood and other fluids leaking down his shirt.

He took a step. And another. And another.

“Holy fuck,” Andy muttered. It wasn’t because of what the rest of us were looking at. His eyes were elsewhere. I followed his gaze.

The doors of the remaining housing units had opened. Their doorways were crowded with human shapes. One by one, thin filaments of slime oozed through the air in the direction of where our survivor’s had gone.

The scene, once silent save for the wind, was filled with that same, terrible guttural sound. People began walking out of the buildings. Walking by us. Walking down the driveway. All their faces were gaping holes. My knees wobbled and I felt my stomach drop.

“What…what do we do?” Lloyd whispered.

“I think we should leave,” I suggested. It was more of a plea.

“We need to see where they’re going,” Andy declared. “We can’t leave yet.”

I hated Andy right then. I despised him. And I despised myself — because I wouldn’t fight. I’d just go along.

“Okay,” John agreed. “But we stay back. And we follow them in the truck.”

“Yeah,” Andy said, and hopped into the driver’s seat. “Come on. Leave everything where it is.”

We piled into the truck and waited as over a hundred people left their homes, then followed the slow, plodding procession of their faceless bodies.

“Where do you think they’re going?” John asked nobody in particular.

“I think I know,” I answered. And I did.

The pylon we’d passed on the way in was surrounded by the hundreds we’d followed. Their empty faces were tilted upward like baby birds, the string of slime connected to something up high — something we could still barely see.

“Can the truck lights swivel that high?” Andy asked me.

“I think so,” I said, and manipulated the mechanism, aiming the bright searchlights on the side of the truck up the side of the pylon.

The thing we’d glimpsed on our way in was still there. Still glistening. But in the harsh light from our truck, we could see it was red and blotchy and streaked with blue veins, like a massive, disembodied organ.

“Oh my God,” Lloyd choked.

The hundreds of grey, slimy filaments connected the survivors to it, but another, different thing connected the creature to a metal box at the base of the pylon. It was thick and red and tubular. It pulsed in slow, regular intervals.

“That’s the phone box for the complex,” John said. He said something else, but I wasn’t listening. All I could think of was what Jenny had radioed.

“…he told me the calls came from a utility extension, like the ones technicians use when they test the phone lines from the pole.”

“Drive,” I demanded. “Andy, fucking drive.”

He didn’t do anything for a minute. He just stared at the non-faces of the survivors, which no longer tilted toward the thing perched atop the pylon, but instead pointed in our direction. All of them.

I could feel the cold wetness of their hollow cavities deep in my chest.

“Drive!” I screamed.

This time, Andy obeyed. The truck skidded for two, eternal seconds in the deep snow, but then lurched forward. We raced down Rural Route 7 and turned onto the main road back toward the firehouse.

“I don’t believe what we just saw,” Lloyd declared. “Didn’t happen, right?”

“I don’t know what happened,” Andy said, “but something did.”

The truck sped down the road. We didn’t say anything for a while.

“Why were they looking at us at the end?” John asked, breaking the quiet.

“They wanted us,” I guessed. “It’s gotta be why that thing made those calls to dispatch. More people or something.”

John nodded. More silence.

The radio beeped. “Go ahead, Jenny,” Andy said. He sounded exhausted.

Jenny sounded annoyed. “Hey, are you guys still at the scene? The dispatchers from Hewitt and Jaynes counties said their crews arrived a little while ago but can’t get them on their radios. And I’m still getting calls from that utility extension about the fire.”

Andy looked at me, his eyes wide with horror.

I picked up the radio and clicked it on. “Um, Jenny…don’t answer any calls from that number anymore. And see if anyone at the base will be around to talk when we get back.”

“So you’re not there?” Jenny asked. There was bewilderment in her voice “Did you leave in the middle of the fi–”

“Just… just call the base,” I told her. “I’ll talk to them when I get back.”

With that, we continued our long drive back to the firehouse in silence. Just the crunch of the snow under our tires and roar of the diesel engine. And, every so often, a voice whispering in the back of our minds.

A voice asking us to turn around and come back.

We didn’t listen.

© Max Lobdell, 2019. May not be reproduced in any format without express written permission.

11 Replies to “The First First Responders”

  1. Interesting story. I found a spelling error in the beginning, you might want to correct that.
    “And we’ve all dealt with hazmats more times I than count.”

  2. this is absolutely terrifying. thank you.

  3. So creepy love your stories!

  4. Ross Presser says:


  5. Is this somehow a continuation of “The Pilot”? It reminds me of it at least

  6. Is this possibly a continuation of “The Pilot”? Either way, a very good read!

    1. m_lobdell1 says:

      Thank you – some of my stories share themes I explored in earlier ones but didn’t get to flesh out as much as I originally wanted. That’s likely the case with this one 🙂

  7. Is this possibly a continuation of your story “The Pilot”? Either way, a very good read!

    Sorry if this comment was posted twice, my browser had some issues and even though I see no duplicate comment it says I posted one ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

  8. Carlos Barahona says:

    Damn this is good stuff!!!
    One little comment though, you mentioned that Andy was a marine medic… All medics that the Marines utilize are actually Navy hospital corpsmen… They’re medics just not Marines, but sailors… Other than that I cannot get enough of your stories.
    Keep up the good work!

  9. Excellent Story, the anticipation was perfect

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